i have some idea of where i want to go with it , but i wanted a second opinion on my thesis statement. this is my first DBQ. i've done one FRQ, but i did really bad on it so any imput would be helpful.

the question is "How Revolutionary was the American Revolution"

here's my thesis:

Though the American Revolution is often looked upon as the birth of 'Freedom for All' it took centuries before socially disregarded groups such as indians, slaves, and women were given equal rights.