Avoiding generalizations in the essay and providing concrete examples of ideas is a very good thing to do in order to get a higher score. Sometimes students repeat the same idea over and over rather than adding depth and layers to the essay. 

 

Using concrete examples from literature, history, current events, or even personal experiences can all add flavor to an essay. Providing specific examples from real life can add depth to an essay which makes it easier for graders to give it a high score.