I have to write an analytical paper on America's first political parties between 1776 and 1825 about the changing nature of that topic and its impact on the U.S.
I want to write something like how in debating about which political party was better, it led to great reforms.... and can't come up with a good thesis that will better state my opinion.... any help?
Well, I'm not sure a thesis debating on which party was better is a good idea. I think a better thesis and essay would be on which party is better suited for the governmental position and why did it have the impact it did on the country.
All you need to do is think it over carefully and rephrase several words until it seems decent enough to guide the essay through its entirety.
That being said, what have you come up with so far, kjavia?
capitalization? who the heck came up with this horrible rule?!
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ib art; ib math sl; ib english
i got this so far,
In the process of fighting and debating between Jeffersonian Democratic-Republicans and Hamiltonian Federalists, many democratic advances were made in America's young government, such as ___,___, and ___ that would forever impact the new nation.
and im hoping i will be able to fill the blanks as i write the essay
That's good to start off with. ^^
capitalization? who the heck came up with this horrible rule?!
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[=DarkOrange][=2]my ap equilavent courses:
ib art; ib math sl; ib english