I fail especially at essays when it comes to AP US History (and I was reminded of that just this morning during a Flex period where we had to write a pop free response essay); every one of them were criticized for not being detailed enough. I've been getting consistent Cs on them and it seems that no matter what I do, I just can't do it right. It would be very helpful if anyone can provide a DBQ and a free response essay that received an A; I really need an idea of how I should structure it and generally what an A essay looks like.