Anyways i have a FRQ tomorrow in class and i need you guys to quickly tell me how my thesis is for the given prompt:
"The effects of the War of 1812 were much more domestic in scope then foreign.” Assess the validity of this statement.
Limit the evidence that supports your response from the years 1789-1824.
so my thesis is: Although the aftermath of Madison's War had its national and international effects, the social and political effects on the nation had more impact than the economical effects did worldwide.
tell me what i should change or add on to my thesis .. thanks
I think it's good if you write the rest of your paper correctly, but I personally think it's a bit limiting. You're kind of implying that there were not economic effects on the nation and no political or social effects on the world.
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eh.. i wrote it today and i think i did ok... hope i just dont get an F on my essay like last time :(